Cpt. Smurf

Thanks, I'll bear all these in mind. Maybe I'll re-write the same thing differently. I'll be sure to update!

Thanks for that! I've edited the errors. I'm glad you enjoyed it, and yes I was going for creepy! (Makes quite a change. I have an annoying habit that means ...

Really good!! I found both second and third parts the more readable, they seemed more interesting and funny!! It's fun to twist things from the books, as if they're in ...